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B&W Study, running towrds the camera with my Torch in this one.

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~gquann Jul 21, 2004, 11:55:49 PM
Good concept!

This is more than the usual "light-streams". Your stream guides the viewer into the image. It also has much more dynamics than the straight streams of cars for example.

Just two tiny suggestions: The bright light at the left of the photo distracts a bit. It would be also very cool if there were more stars... though I have no idea how to realize this because they are probably too dim. But even giving the sky more room might be a little improvement.

Anyway, great photo, congrats! :)
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~Meaner Jul 22, 2004, 12:42:03 AM
Yeah, stars in the city dont really do that well :s Too much Light Pollution. And yea, This was when I started out, so I didnt consider things like background lights, but now I do things like move so lights are behind trees etc :D

thanks for your constructive comments!

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~sodium-pentathol Apr 19, 2005, 11:11:49 AM
Yeah, you were eight! This is totally sweet... I've gotta get my minolta fixed and get out there with my tripod...

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~sodium-pentathol Apr 19, 2005, 11:12:33 AM
Obviously, that should have said "right"... I wasn't trying to guess your age or anything, I just can't type!

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I feel my luck coud change."

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~Meaner Apr 19, 2005, 12:36:46 PM
Haha, eight, thats greight ;) :D thanks though! It was a lot of fun making these pictures! Led me doign what I do now :D

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*SPEARdesign May 13, 2005, 10:34:20 AM
the concept is sweet, and i think the light trail looks brill, but i think, considering how long you took on the pics, perhaps find a better location? just a suggestion, nothing wrong with this pic, but it would look way cool if u had someone doing this, running in and out of the sand dunes - say with the camera up quite high with a good view and someone doing this below....why not get a few people along to run around with you? lol that would be so fun :P

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~Meaner May 13, 2005, 1:37:08 PM
Hehe yeah, I think you are completely right :) To be fair this was 3 years ago, I didnt really have my night photo legs yet :) If I was to do it now, I would choose a far more interesting location :) Thanks for the critique! :D I completely agree!

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*SPEARdesign May 13, 2005, 2:36:00 PM
ah that's cool, that's fair hehe, glad its appreciated :)

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<< As long as it looks good, Does it have to make Sense? >>
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~Meaner May 13, 2005, 7:47:49 PM
I actually took a similar style shot some months later, that I feel is entirely more successful, in terms of the content of the surroundings (it was still a park, but the scene was more interesting) but it didnt have that up and down ness that I liked about this shot, I'll see if I can find it, maybe upload it to scraps to show ya :D


Hmm, had a look, unfortunately I never scanned it in! You'll just have to take my word for it hehe :D

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